Report on the Bindii Meeting Sunday September 28, 2025
Julia Wakefield, Subha Goonaratne, Stella Damarjati, Maeve Archibald, Ewan Rourke and Lynette Arden met on Sunday September 28 at 4.30pm, using Zoom. Apologies were received from Maureen Sexton. The attendees all brought some haiku for review, some of which were on the theme of spring, as suggested previously.
Maeve
mentioned an upcoming poetry event she had been invited to present at, at the
Poetry Lab, where she planned to discuss haiku forms, focusing on Basho and Issa,
with plans to include an Australian haiku artist for comparison. Lynette
reported on the Haiku Musings discussion on the Australian Haiku Society
website, expressing concern about low participation and suggesting an open
discussion format might encourage more contributions. Ewan shared his success
in being selected for a haiku mentoring program with Rob Scott, which will consist
of weekly Zoom sessions until the end of the year, providing opportunities for
in-depth haiku discussions.
We
discussed the use of personal pronouns in Haiku poetry, with Ewan seeking
clarification on whether to include "I" or "me" in his
poems. We agreed that while classical Japanese Haiku avoid personal references,
English Haiku can include personal elements, meaning that Ewan's version was
effective.
We
now have a system whereby if a member has to leave before the end or is unable
to attend, we all send them individual feedback.
No
date was fixed for the next meeting, and no topic was specified.
Julia
Wakefield
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