Bindii meeting, April 10 2021, report.

 Present: Lyn, Stella, Steve and Maeve. Apology: Julia.

 Saturday afternoon's Bindii meeting was a discussion with feedback on haibun.

 Maeve's haibun was written in classic haibun style, with haiku inserted at the end of each paragraph. 

    Stella offered her 3 short haibun, in the style of a flash fiction (30 words), followed by one haiku. We discussed changing the prose to present tense (from past tense) and possibly expanding the prose to make it feel more satisfying. 

 The next meeting will be on the 27th June at 3pm. Meeting topic: haiku workshop.

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