October Challenge 3 'Love' Get link Facebook X Pinterest Email Other Apps October 18, 2011 Spring is in the air and the topic is 'love'. Use any of the Japanese poetry genres to explore any aspect of the topic. Get link Facebook X Pinterest Email Other Apps Comments athena19 October 2011 at 22:50This comment has been removed by the author.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyathena19 October 2011 at 23:04lovewhipering softlyso easyto mistake its deeperreference and inclineReplyDeleteRepliesReplyathena19 October 2011 at 23:17your livered handgrasps mineas night shadows usno need for utterancesthe evening star is winkingReplyDeleteRepliesReplyathena19 October 2011 at 23:22in the kitchenin her frilly apronmy motherveiled in herb aromasstirring love in a potReplyDeleteRepliesReplyBelindaBroughton20 October 2011 at 18:46dark of the moon our breath minglingReplyDeleteRepliesReplyBelindaBroughton20 October 2011 at 18:47after all these years warm as our bed together our loveReplyDeleteRepliesReplyBelindaBroughton20 October 2011 at 18:48a rush of heart and regret the scent of his scarfReplyDeleteRepliesReplySasha23 October 2011 at 02:57at the bottomof the ripped letter loveReplyDeleteRepliesReplySasha23 October 2011 at 02:59in the previous haiku 'love' was supposed to be at the right of the last line, not lined up to the left. Miaowwwww!!!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAdd commentLoad more... Post a Comment
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so easy
to mistake its deeper
reference and incline
your livered hand
ReplyDeletegrasps mine
as night shadows us
no need for utterances
the evening star is winking
in the kitchen
ReplyDeletein her frilly apron
my mother
veiled in herb aromas
stirring love in a pot
dark of the moon
ReplyDeleteour breath
mingling
after all these years
ReplyDeletewarm as our bed together
our love
a rush
ReplyDeleteof heart and regret
the scent of his scarf
at the bottom
ReplyDeleteof the ripped letter
love
in the previous haiku 'love' was supposed to be at the right of the last line, not lined up to the left. Miaowwwww!!!
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