tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4486618791851258934.post746945846926530716..comments2013-03-21T04:45:51.695-07:00Comments on Haiku Bindii: October Challenge 3 'Love'Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4486618791851258934.post-51373049502553738412011-10-23T02:59:07.100-07:002011-10-23T02:59:07.100-07:00in the previous haiku 'love' was supposed ...in the previous haiku 'love' was supposed to be at the right of the last line, not lined up to the left. Miaowwwww!!!Sashahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07491812284992435797noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4486618791851258934.post-70370398335305533002011-10-23T02:57:13.939-07:002011-10-23T02:57:13.939-07:00at the bottom
of the ripped letter
l...at the bottom<br />of the ripped letter<br /> loveSashahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07491812284992435797noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4486618791851258934.post-63797354538593832242011-10-20T18:48:56.653-07:002011-10-20T18:48:56.653-07:00a rush
of heart and regret
the scent of his scar...a rush <br />of heart and regret <br />the scent of his scarfBelindaBroughtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07869532077301104783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4486618791851258934.post-63385919730971499852011-10-20T18:47:29.532-07:002011-10-20T18:47:29.532-07:00after all these years
warm as our bed together
o...after all these years <br />warm as our bed together <br />our loveBelindaBroughtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07869532077301104783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4486618791851258934.post-74123308814960755782011-10-20T18:46:13.263-07:002011-10-20T18:46:13.263-07:00dark of the moon
our breath
minglingdark of the moon <br />our breath <br />minglingBelindaBroughtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07869532077301104783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4486618791851258934.post-74536292457052665122011-10-19T23:22:21.860-07:002011-10-19T23:22:21.860-07:00in the kitchen
in her frilly apron
my mother
veile...in the kitchen<br />in her frilly apron<br />my mother<br />veiled in herb aromas<br />stirring love in a potathenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15827917027537773725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4486618791851258934.post-70042141673169583662011-10-19T23:17:39.127-07:002011-10-19T23:17:39.127-07:00your livered hand
grasps mine
as night shadows us
...your livered hand<br />grasps mine<br />as night shadows us<br />no need for utterances<br />the evening star is winkingathenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15827917027537773725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4486618791851258934.post-45704505948084605772011-10-19T23:04:03.297-07:002011-10-19T23:04:03.297-07:00love
whipering softly
so easy
to mistake its deepe...love<br />whipering softly<br />so easy<br />to mistake its deeper<br />reference and inclineathenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15827917027537773725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4486618791851258934.post-10134287266430843952011-10-19T22:50:19.458-07:002011-10-19T22:50:19.458-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.athenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15827917027537773725noreply@blogger.com