tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4486618791851258934.post2122585325000224558..comments2013-03-21T04:45:51.695-07:00Comments on Haiku Bindii: August ChallengeUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4486618791851258934.post-53499771672934321162012-08-22T23:03:42.334-07:002012-08-22T23:03:42.334-07:00after the storm
fallen succulent
a shade of terrac...after the storm<br />fallen succulent<br />a shade of terracotta<br />Alex Ryanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05910577730847713254noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4486618791851258934.post-61812807793321906762012-08-21T20:32:43.738-07:002012-08-21T20:32:43.738-07:00from the agapanthus
lilly spire pierces
late winte...from the agapanthus<br />lilly spire pierces<br />late winterAlex Ryanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05910577730847713254noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4486618791851258934.post-33769948638189726902012-08-20T09:05:20.988-07:002012-08-20T09:05:20.988-07:00a nubile bloom
great potential
inadvertently crush...a nubile bloom<br />great potential<br />inadvertently crushed<br />the sorrowful groundPiphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720448450116459367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4486618791851258934.post-90159615438246555172012-08-18T16:23:57.713-07:002012-08-18T16:23:57.713-07:00ready to spring
a golden elm
budding
a wasted tale...ready to spring<br />a golden elm<br />budding<br />a wasted talent<br />the coach and her studentAlex Ryanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05910577730847713254noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4486618791851258934.post-24409513299215124092012-08-18T16:16:23.230-07:002012-08-18T16:16:23.230-07:00a crimson rosella
flits from one branch
to another...a crimson rosella<br />flits from one branch<br />to another<br />his evasive comments<br />about his feelingsAlex Ryanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05910577730847713254noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4486618791851258934.post-71007762179760772662012-08-16T00:20:58.212-07:002012-08-16T00:20:58.212-07:00Keisha you don't have to write in lines of 5/7...Keisha you don't have to write in lines of 5/7/5 syllables, as in English writing poets don't do that. <br />See Diamond's Haiku Hints<br />http://diamond-cat.blogspot.com.au/p/diamonds-haiku-hints.html<br />Sashahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07491812284992435797noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4486618791851258934.post-31568851311801001142012-08-15T00:45:27.605-07:002012-08-15T00:45:27.605-07:00after the shower
slow drip
fiery callistemonafter the shower<br />slow drip<br />fiery callistemonAlex Ryanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05910577730847713254noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4486618791851258934.post-90494767924292625622012-08-14T22:46:26.771-07:002012-08-14T22:46:26.771-07:00Hi Keisha, thanks for making a regular contributio...Hi Keisha, thanks for making a regular contribution to our blog.<br />Try putting a fragment and segment in your poems, that is, avoid one sentence for whole poem. It should break into two parts. See mine below.<br />Alex Ryan.Alex Ryanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05910577730847713254noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4486618791851258934.post-90986236960104124292012-08-14T20:44:55.421-07:002012-08-14T20:44:55.421-07:00trampled
ornate tulips
lobby carpettrampled<br />ornate tulips<br />lobby carpetAlex Ryanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05910577730847713254noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4486618791851258934.post-39789234017271976822012-08-13T20:30:21.235-07:002012-08-13T20:30:21.235-07:00Dry leaves in the wind
Crisp from summer's sun...Dry leaves in the wind<br />Crisp from summer's sunny days<br />Soon drop in autumnDonnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16712710601861189554noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4486618791851258934.post-65822507470785124752012-08-12T01:02:31.669-07:002012-08-12T01:02:31.669-07:00winter evening
visit to mother's
if only
she c...winter evening<br />visit to mother's<br />if only<br />she could remember<br />the season, alone the dayAlex Ryanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05910577730847713254noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4486618791851258934.post-42189175332304771952012-08-10T18:59:08.682-07:002012-08-10T18:59:08.682-07:00Hoomins play handball
Throw the ball into the net
...Hoomins play handball<br />Throw the ball into the net<br />Win with lots of pointsDonnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16712710601861189554noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4486618791851258934.post-83151590681170992282012-08-10T18:55:59.000-07:002012-08-10T18:55:59.000-07:00Rain is in the air
Smell of big clouds on the bree...Rain is in the air<br />Smell of big clouds on the breeze<br />Soon the thunder boomsDonnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16712710601861189554noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4486618791851258934.post-6162214077461977362012-08-10T03:41:23.111-07:002012-08-10T03:41:23.111-07:00midday catnap
his whiskers twitch
in a mousechasemidday catnap<br />his whiskers twitch<br />in a mousechaseSashahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07491812284992435797noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4486618791851258934.post-45052305732407657152012-08-10T03:33:33.216-07:002012-08-10T03:33:33.216-07:00dun coloured scrub
the warm glow of wattle
scents ...dun coloured scrub<br />the warm glow of wattle<br />scents the airlynettehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15321739450583785932noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4486618791851258934.post-69337243006061405932012-08-10T03:09:22.529-07:002012-08-10T03:09:22.529-07:00olympics week
I run down the street
just for funolympics week<br />I run down the street<br />just for funAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4486618791851258934.post-65232759904330091642012-08-10T01:27:33.558-07:002012-08-10T01:27:33.558-07:00torch lights
a cloudy sky
fractured by sunsettorch lights<br />a cloudy sky<br />fractured by sunsetAlex Ryanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05910577730847713254noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4486618791851258934.post-42098037498920594422012-08-10T01:26:29.643-07:002012-08-10T01:26:29.643-07:00pink confetti
strong gust rattles
a cherry blossom...pink confetti<br />strong gust rattles<br />a cherry blossomAlex Ryanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05910577730847713254noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4486618791851258934.post-70766475867232229462012-08-05T18:16:54.175-07:002012-08-05T18:16:54.175-07:00Ice melts and grass grows
Each day the sun shines ...Ice melts and grass grows<br />Each day the sun shines longer<br />Warm season is nearDonnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16712710601861189554noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4486618791851258934.post-90082148700138750482012-08-05T18:12:54.148-07:002012-08-05T18:12:54.148-07:00Run and jump and throw
Be the fastest and the best...Run and jump and throw<br />Be the fastest and the best<br />Make your country proudDonnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16712710601861189554noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4486618791851258934.post-14896384506803439982012-08-05T18:11:03.697-07:002012-08-05T18:11:03.697-07:00Happy blossoms sprout
Little red bumps on tree lim...Happy blossoms sprout<br />Little red bumps on tree limbs<br />Soon the birds will singDonnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16712710601861189554noreply@blogger.com